Can a native speaker of English check structure and grammar of the sentences, thanks?

I felt like living in a venerable castle. Roses are in full bloom around the walls; all of the windows were made of crystal, as pure as tears; at midnight, I'll ware princess dress were woven from petals and leaves, by the pumpkin carriage, go to the prom. I'll meet a little prince who has a pair star of eyes, his skin was as fair as snowflake, he invite me to dance, he walk with me and pick up my shoe while I was leaving.